07 December 2020

I hold onto things

 Like the foil layer inside the tin containers of Nivea covering the cream, because I know my mother always made it a point to keep it on. she always said it was an extra layer of protection from outside elements. The cream is too thick for me but that doesn’t stop me from reaching for the iconic blue container every time I see it in a store...

I wish I could tell my 7th grade teacher Mr. Valerie how his description of fibreglass insulation has stayed with me. How a moment of pragmatic warning has been impressed in m memory as a poetic urging. How some nights when I am laying in bed anxious, the thought of those tiny, invisible shards landing on my eyeballs are among the list of causes.


There is an old bottle of ه ه ه cologne that belonged to my father which I keep in the back corner of a shelf of old and unused notebooks. In spite of his passing, I can’t always bear the harsh smell. I like to look at it, though. I know that of the few material elements my father ever clung to in his world, his bottle of ه ه ه—sprayed liberally on everything and always bought by the case full on visits to cairo—was one omnipresent necessity. I don’t know if it’s just me, but I swear every time I look the liquid seems to sit lower in the bottle, like an hourglass. Another item on that nightly list—the day the cologne will evaporate entirely. 





12 October 2020

Dear Alex: A Sort-of Love Story



One of the first grand gestures of love my father made just after marrying my mother was to buy her a tiny apartment close enough to the beach in Alexandria, the city she loved most. 

my earliest memories of visiting egypt largely revolve around the summers we spent in Alexandria; the days that disappeared on the beach building sand castles or being carried over the waves by my father...days that gave way to nights spent along the corniche or on the balcony breathing in as much salty breeze as we could while listening to stories. 

i remember the beach carnival in Ma’moura where i insisted on riding the strawberry twirly ride over and over again and the subsequent taxi ride home where i threw up all over my sister’s favourite white shorts. and the tram I used to beg my mom to let us ride until she finally gave in, taking me on a field trip to the famed fortress, aquarium and library. i remember all the Pizza Hut we used to eat as kids after abandoning several attempts at eating the fresh seafood (sorry mom & dad). in this city i visited my first circus, weaved my first animal out of beads under my cousin Gihan’s tutelage, and had my first real family vacations.






 






WHAT I SEE/HEAR/TASTE/SMELL/FEEL WHEN I THINK ABOUT YOU:
  • the rest stop in Tanta where we would always eat fiteer with lots of honey and cheeses.

  • the red and white striped beach umbrella and chairs we would drag to Montazah every morning.

  • the sound of “Fresca!” being yelled out across the sandy seashore by men (and boys) carrying glass display cases full of homemade treats (my favourite = the coconut or sesames ones)

  • sitting down to smoke shisha on the corniche after strolling along it. 

  • the brilliant white of the buildings, or at least thinking so after a month or two spent in dust-covered cairo.

  • the cotton candy peddlers, with bags of yellow and pink and white puffs raised up high.

  • fresh plain yogurt topped with honey on the balcony as we huddled against the sea breeze listening to my father’s stories.

  • rotisserie chicken on the beach after a day spent in the sea, then mango or strawberry ice cream (whatever baba was having).

  • freshly caught seafood as far as the eye can see. 

  • the man who tended a flower garden and gave me a fresh bloom whenever he saw me passing by.

  







to be honest, it’s easiest to remember Alexandria so fondly from a temporal and geographical distance. over the years, it started to feel as though the place had silently drifted from the oasis of my parents’ loving imagination to a fragmented, decaying version of itself. the buildings seemed unbearably close, the total mismanagement of garbage that resulted in stinking piles left out to smouldering sun, the impossibility of trying to swim in its beaches as a woman all made it seem less attractive. that meant shorter stays and a lost opportunity to familiarize myself with its neighbourhoods the way i had so eagerly done in Cairo. after years spent resisting my cousins’ snobbish comments about how Alexandria was no longer worth visiting and why didn’t we go to nearby Sahel instead, it feels as though I’ve finally betrayed my mom’s vision...






 but whenever i find pictures taken throughout our visits, i am transported back to the all the memories my family made here and I am grateful...


02 February 2020

(Less Scattered) Thoughts on Thawrah 25 yanayir

Somehow, it's already been nine years since one of the most seminal series of events in my life took place. At the same time, it's hard to believe that it's only been nine years since whatever it was that happened...

Like so many other Egyptians, the 2011 revolution felt like my raison d'être. Even from halfway across the world, it was difficult to think of much else. I remember skipping lecture after lecture just to steal away into the library and obsessively refresh my Twitter feed, aching to be there myself. It gave me a reason to write that felt like something bigger than me and my tiny world. 

In addition to recognizing the difference in atmosphere between Egypt and Canada, I’d grown up largely listening to my father’s own memories of living in a repressed, paranoid military state. It all made this movement feel that much more important. Here was a country in which anti-government opinion was restricted from all media, inside and out. A country filled with stories of police aggression--some made notorious (like the audacious 2010 murder of Khaled Saeed by Egyptian police in an internet cafe), some disguised in films that toed the line of censorship, and some only whispered amongst terrified neighbours when nobody else was listening. 

Never had we been given so much access to the news coming out of Egypt. Every major media outlet was locked into the quickly unfolding events. Every channel we tuned into seemed to be reporting live from the scene, or engaged in some sort of discourse around the revolution. And of course there were the videos being uploaded to Youtube, videos that carried narratives the bigger networks were too afraid to show. Outside of my father's daily insistence on reminding us of the place, I had never seen so much focus on the country I was raised to consider "home".

Egyptian Revolution Solidarity March in Toronto (January 2011)

And it wasn't just the Egyptians back home or in the diaspora (or those from the diaspora who went back home for the revolution) who kept me engaged. Finally my friends were asking me about things other than the pyramids, my professors involving me in conversations that didn't revolve around the free will of Muslim women. One of my English professors at the time--a well-known poet who openly spoke of his own revolutionary tendencies as a youth--especially indulged my preoccupation. We exchanged handwritten messages about the developments in Egypt after class and interesting articles with intersecting opinions on the future of the revolution.

I've memorized my father's nostalgic and proudly recounted version of the military coup that overtook the British. It was as if he was directly involved in the cause of liberating their country. It wasn’t so much that he was living vicariously through Nasser and his comrades, but living alongside them--when they spent countless months planning and re-planning every step without leaving a paper trail, when they took over state radio to make the announcement, and when they paraded through the same Tahrir Sq. among thousands of people…As the headlines quickly went from "protest" to "unrest" to "revolution", I felt like I was able to relate in ways I never had  before. This new raison d'être was also a means by which I could wrestle some attention from my ever-elusive father.

In those few months, everything took on mythic proportions.

As one of the most enthralling and deeply embedded bloggers to cover the revolution @sandmonkey once wrote,

"It's hard not to disengage from reality when observing or experiencing the revolution; through it we have lived all of our Hollywood cinematic fantasies." 

I used to cry a lot about the revolution. It was the infectious tone of hope by demonstrators, carried in the clever chants of hundreds, thousands of in-synch voices. It was the scenes of brutal violence that met them, and the stories of those mourning the (too) many who lost their lives in the carnage. It was the impassioned arguments I had with my father, who suddenly seemed to embody the general malaise that seemed to overshadow what had felt like the most momentous time I would ever witness. It was the eventual reality that perhaps the revolution was over, and that whatever dreams I once obsessed over may have just ended up being fantasies.

 

As the pace of the events sped into what felt like a constant whirlwind, thinking about everything seemed to induce a sense of vertigo. At times it felt like too much to keep up with, in other moments it felt like everything was at a standstill and I was just halfway across the world, helplessly waiting. In the last few years, my reactive responses have given way to a nostalgia painted in cynical hues. Losing my father last year meant losing a lifeline to the place I'd inherited as homeland. And my relationship to the idea of Egypt as my only "home" has only grown more complicated, nuanced, and precarious. 


In a post from February of 2011 (called "Scattered Thoughts on Egypt", of course),  I shared some of my conflicting feelings on the revolution. When I read them today I felt a tiny spark of the intensity those days brought to my life, and I feel a tinge of the lassitude that hasn't subsided since. Mostly I felt the sense of belonging to the revolution, of finding "home":
I sat by watching, my mind eager to snatch any new breakthroughs or information. My energy went from being fully devoted to listening to the stories from the front lines, to feeling weary and almost wishing the entire situation would just end.I've had trouble eating and sleeping, and have obsessively spent my time flipping between CNN and BBC, to getting live streams of Al Jazeera online. It borders on hysteria. 
I've Youtubed the same videos over and over, marched with hundreds of Torontonians for 2 Saturdays in a row, and have relentlessly pounded my cousin with questions about what its REALLY like down there.I've engaged in debates, explained what was happening to anybody who will listen, and brushed up on historical accounts of the power struggle that has ailed my country for decades. 
I'm tired. 
The other day, I scolded myself for feeling this way. I thought "What on earth gives YOU the right to feel weary and over-informed when these heroes are out there on the streets, determined to find an end that can satisfy them?!?"But am I really wrong for needing a break from all this overexposure? Have I betrayed my country and fellow Egyptians every time I've given a half-assed answer to people's questions in order to avoid launching into a full conversation?---- 
I'm at the point where I can look back at the full range of emotions and ideas I've had since January 25, and almost pinpoint the days when my attitude went from an excited, curious, hopeful observer, to a weary, almost paranoid bystander who got sucked into a dramatic scenario unwillingly. 
I remember feeling, albeit selfishly, PROUD and EXCITED that my country was making headline news. For once in my 21 years in Toronto, people recognized the flag on my bag. For once, I could head downtown and find hundreds of other supporters of the Egyptian people, speaking my language, sharing my vision for the future of our homeland. 
And I ate it right up. I stayed glued to CNN, collected any newspaper headlines (most, making front-page) about Egypt, and shared videos on my feed.
I've absorbed the news with an almost sadistic pleasure. I hate the way they make us look on TV. I resent the images of people fighting off men on horseback, burning pictures and flags- this is merely a snapshot of a situation that the rest of the world wants to dismiss as black-and-white, ignoring the multi-faceted colours emerging with every new image, testimony, or minute change... 
But I love seeing my country on there...

01 February 2020

From the Archives: The Re-Birth of a Nation...

"Liberty and union, one and inseparable, now and forever!"


I keep having this recurring thought: After the celebrations end, the CNN troops withdraw from the land, and the sentimental speeches from foreign heads of state come to a close, what is left?

Over 300 dead shahidin minimized to a statue erected in their honour?
Spatially, a downtown square already envisioned as the Freedom Square, re-crowned "Tahrir Sq."?
An already ailing, aged ruler whose fatal flaw has been pride and a reluctance to acknowledge reality?
A power vacuum, leaving the "new Egypt" vulnerable to whomever has the loudest voice?
And a nation of almost 85 million who never imagined that they would live to see such radical change in a country


February 14, 2011

11 November 2018

(not so) Artful Dodger, or, These Words Don’t Mean Nothing

i respond to the hurt i feel by writing cleverly coded, overly ornate pieces of bullshit that always manage to disguise whatever it is that makes me want to express those feelings in the first place.

i carefully avoid invoking the “i”, and even my “you” is so easy to see through. so diluted, and even if you know what i meant to say, the meaning proves untraceable. where in the world is waldo? 

 i gather up the truth, smash into all sorts of incongruous pieces and then lay it out in a half-assed attempt at making a mosaic; so many pieces left out, and so many shards contorted into unrecognizable tiles with unassuming edges. and they weren’t even that interesting to look at, let alone beautiful.

sometimes, a game of tetris—or, how to assemble objects in an empty space. if you flip that story to that angle, and scoot that fact  over a few slots, well somehow it all fits and nobody gets hurt. except when it doesn’t and the whole thing comes tumbling down. or is that jenga?

that’s the thing about using a lot of words: not everyone knows/sees/cares what you aren’t saying... and more probably, even what you are. 


02 October 2018

Selves Delusion

 “And I have found both freedom and safety in my madness; the freedom of loneliness and the safety from being understood, for those who understand us enslave something in us.”
Khalil Gibran, The Madman: His Parables and Poems 

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It's a cool September evening with rain looming in the forecast and the phantom presence of summer lingering in the air; ****** and I have unintentionally embarked on another one of our dérives. As our legs carry us onward through Scarborough with almost no direction, he leads the conversation into a new-ish topic.

"Not to get too morbid or anything, but do you ever think about what people will remember of you, you know, when you're gone?"

"Of course. I thought everyone did..."

"Well, what do you think they'll remember?"

"Hmm...Inaccuracies."
 

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“My friend, I am not what I seem. Seeming is but a garment I wear--a care-woven garment that protects me from thy questionings and thee from my negligence.”

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I contemplate this exchange between ****** and I over and over again for the days following. I've quickly come to appreciate the ways in which our conversations manifest themselves into endless thoughts long after we've parted ways. Beyond that, I appreciate the sense of freedom as we mutually expel the ideas that can otherwise cause undue alarm among the others. The more I consider it, the more I can conclude that the source of my comfort lies in the fact that there are versions of myself than can exist unrestricted in the company of this friend. My fear isn't necessarily that those versions don't feel safe when shown to the others--or, any less safe than the rest of my selves--but that they might somehow endanger those they're exposed to. I've employed a new strategy over the last number of years in anticipation of this disconcertedness: show the most challenging versions of myself right away and see if they'll run. This seems to have worked out even better than I imagine...few remain. But then, what about the stubborn ones--the ones who wholeheartedly cling to versions of me I don't even recognize.

I can hear Don Draper's raspy voice uttering those lines about people showing us who they are and our failure to believe those versions, because "we want them to be who we want them to be."


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I would not have thee believe in what I say nor trust in what I do--for my words are naught but thy own thoughts in sound and my deeds thy own hopes in action.
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Sometimes I am so overwhelmed by the absolute boring-ness of the selves others have construed of me, I can't begin to imagine how these versions can satisfy them. Perhaps there is an element of self-delusion at play in this claim. My favourite line to thwart the advances of interested, but not interesting suitors was always "But you don't even know me..."

I once made it a mission to avoid those people at all costs, the ones who project their version(s) of me, but I soon learned how Sisyphean a task that would be. It simply doesn't matter how much you assert yourself--or, the versions of yourself you think to be more accurate than those perceived of you externally--because that self is still subject to their own sensibilities.
In one of my favourite scenes of Waking Life, Timothy 'Speed' Levitch closes his monologue with the haunting lines
"as one realizes that one is a dream-figure in another person's dream - that is self-awareness!"
I read somewhere that in ancient Ubuntu philosophy, humans are born without ‘ena’, or selfhood, and only acquire it through interactions and experiences with others in the external world. Even in more Western schools of thought and disciplines, self-knowledge is most always constituted through relationships with others.
  
 The Self as a kaleidoscope (of versions) is an image that has its abundance of iterations in this post-, post-modern world...


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In the stillest hour of the night, as I lay half asleep, my seven selves sat together and thus conversed in whisper...

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Growing up, we are fed a steady diet of well-intentioned axioms that basically tell us to be ourselves and disregard what others think of us--to "dance like nobody is watching". Of course as we get older and (hopefully) develop some critical thinking skills, we soon realize how unavailing these messages are--what is a subjective self?. Sometimes, though, we default to these as coping mechanisms when we feel overwhelmed by the burden of perception. Or as pseudo-intellectuals might otherwise identify as being subject to a dangerous gaze of some sort.

If you've ever been in an abusive relationship, you may recognize what I'm getting at. Sometimes, an important part of surviving some of these experiences is by convincing ourselves not to pay any. attention. what. so. ever. to what is being said about us. This is a lot harder than it sounds, and I think it becomes even more difficult over time. Sure, it may be easy to disregard the fuming vitriol being spewed in our direction as meaningless ire reflecting only the inner turmoil of the abuser, that we are simply casualties of that inner war. The only problem is, the 'abuser' is also usually the person who knows versions of ourselves that others have not accessed...


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You ask me how I became a madman. It happened thus: One day, long before many gods were born, I woke from a deep sleep and found all my masks were stolen--the seven masks I have fashioned and worn in seven lives. I ran maskless through the crowded streets shouting, “Thieves, thieves, the cursed thieves.”

Men and women laughed at me and some ran to their houses in fear of me.

And when I reached the market place, a youth standing on a house-top cried, “He is a madman.” I looked up to behold him; the sun kissed my own naked face for the first time. For the first time the sun kissed my own naked face and my soul was inflamed with love for the sun, and I wanted my masks no more. And as if in a trance I cried, “Blessed, blessed are the thieves who stole my masks.”

Thus I became a madman.

05 September 2018

WORK




...because monday was "labour day" & because the studio sessions have such a genuine quality to them & because the capitalist wheel never stops spinning & because i've never thought about music in such specific terms




Duty and Unity: On the Form and Function of Labour in Bob Marley’s “Work”

As a pioneer in the development of the reggae aesthetic, Bob Marley is often credited with injecting the fresh cultural and nationalist product of the newly independent Jamaican state into the worldwide mainstream. However this has created a cult-like consumption of the music even penetrating the academia, as reflected in the sparse scholarship dealing with his musical canon as serious works of lyrical, poetic, and pedagogical value. There exists a large body of literature dealing with Rastafarianism generally and Marley’s engagement with this anomalistic spirituality, but with the exception of some of his better-known songs such as “One Love”, “No Woman No Cry”, and “Redemption Song”, there is a lack of critical writing addressing most of his poetry. For this reason I will be exploring in more depth the song “Work” from Uprising (1980), the last album released by Bob Marley and The Wailers before Marley’s death in 1981, a song which is relatively obscure and who’s structure is “simple” in contrast to much of Bob Marley’s work. By approaching this song as both a reggae-infused version of the labouror/ prisoner’s chant, and a musical spiritual-sermon of sorts, I hope to engage in a conversation dealing with the complex shift of tone in Marley’s aesthetic, particularly at this climactic time for him personally and for Jamaican culture at large. In working within the limits of this paper’s length, I will therefore focus on the repetitive value and deceptive simplicity of the song’s lyrics in regards to their poetic appeal. As this is a performed piece of literature (i.e. a song), I will also briefly link these ideas to some of the sonic features, including the rhythm, tempo, and vocals. By doing this analysis I hope to gain some more insight into the piece’s overall tone as a dismal commentary on the futility of the “work” (required of “Jah’s people”), and the prospective reward offered by this endeavor—a commentary, contradictory as it were, of a lower-class musician turned spiritual leader made acutely aware of his own lingering mortality.
By the time Uprising had been released, reggae music had come to develop as a globally recognized musical genre deeply associated with pioneering figures like Bob Marley—its Rastafarian influence and association with liberationist movements built on principles of self-reliance and self-confidence worked to create a cultural niche for a society whose ancestors’ own cultures were purposefully omitted and obscured. This sense of communal independence and the utilitarian work ethic required to sustain it is evident in the song’s opening lines, “We Jah people can make it work/ Come together and make it work, yeah!” Marley calls out to the listener—immediately compelling a tone of unity and duty. The singer then repeats “We can make it work” (x2), a sense of agency cast in urgency (the lyrics themselves as well as their repetition) made immediately comprehensible in the first bars. The idea of agency relates to the song’s subjectivity and begs the question of who the “We” being invoked are, a topic which requires its own discussion and therefore cannot be paid the attention it is due in this paper. I will comment, however, that in implicating himself—a best-selling, world-famous, infamously mixed-race artist—with this “We”, Bob Marley relocates the song from a place of worker’s anthem to a transcendent position whose meaning may not be so visceral—this “We” has more in common than just lifestyle and class or social status.
The musical background coincided with the political scene in Jamaica at the time, one centred on the region’s Socialist craze of the mid-20th century and reflected in the names of leading political parties such as the JLP, or Jamaican Labour Party. This sort of context is amplified by the reality of Jamaica’s historical development as a slave colony, a dismal narrative that is invoked by the spirit of labour ringing through the economically-unstable island nation, predominantly composed of wage-laborours (Hodges, 2005). Bob Marley notoriously referred to his music as ‘the people’s noise’, or some variation of this, and it therefore follows that much of his music would reflect the day-to-day routine of much of the island’s population. This sense of the circuitousness of history, paired with the strong ethos of labour in modern Jamaica, is reflected in the stanza that follows. By counting down days, Marley invokes the tradition of the worker (or prisoner’s) chant, which plays into the piece’s thematic significance of the futility of the labour needed to ‘keep the wheels spinning’.
By universalizing this, Marley reminds the reader that such a task is ongoing and exhaustive—a function that parallels the mood of desperation created by the repetition from the preceding bars. The dignity of the work bestowed on “Jah people” from the first line seems to be negated or at least undermined by the “countdown bars”; despite the level of collaborative effort that may be required, it all seems futile, Sisyphean in the sense that it will always be “for the next day” and the next and the next and so on. This is highlighted by the final line of the stanza, for even when there is but “one day to go”, the work is far from over, as: “Every day is work—work—work—work—work!”. By singing the “work” notes specifically to the down-beat of the tempo, the music emphasizes the dismal mood captured by the repetition of that word. In watching a live in-studio performance of the song, one can sense the shifts in the grain Marley’s voice as he sings the countdown—notably missing from this portion of the song are the colourful ad libs (the “woy-ah-ya-ya”s and “ooh”s which play a crucial role in Marley’s sound specifically and in reggae’s reliance on what Kamau Brathwaite calls “national language” (Brathwaite, 1984). When one considers the fatigue of constant touring and recording and Marley’s declining health due to cancer, this sonic shift takes on more personal meaning.
In fact, the song’s turning point can be located after this initial countdown segment. Rather than entirely give way to the despair of unending labour, the doubling or mirror effect of the “We can make it work” imbues Marley with the same sense of insistence it did earlier, but is now made more functional because it follows the chant-like anthem of the worker’s countdown. In other words, the sense of over-simplfication and futility acts as a reminder of how imperative the task at hand is, and Marley convinces the listener that all of the efforts will mean that we can make it work (repeated again, in case some are still non-believers). The simplicity and uniformity of the song’s basic rhythm is then challenged with the guitar solo that follows, a break from the slow, down-beat rhythm heavily concentrated in the bass and drum instrumentals of the music. Once again the “We” that is being invoked is emphasized both vocally and rhythmically with a longer beat count.
The temporal and spatial distance provided by the countdown in between—which itself acts as a device of paradox, for what is the “it” being made to “work” if the process is perpetual and circuitous—also adds another layer of meaning and tone to this doubling. As with the song’s opening Marley calls on the listener to involve him or herself into the active process through a sense of duty, but now he must also confront the task of convincing the ‘workers’ that their efforts are not only worthwhile, but necessary to the functioning of a sovereign and autonomous socio-political entity on one hand, and an infinite spiritual salvation for the individual on the other. This sense of mission and spiritual duty vested in unity of “Jah people” is very much in tune with the body of music created by Bob Marley and The Wailers, especially in these later periods. However, “Work” is different from some of these songs not only in its relative lack of complex poetical and rhetorical devices, but because of less incendiary lyrics and tone.
It is then understandable why the stanza that follows is yet another repetition of the first stanza, contributing to the song’s overall deceptively simple structure and reflecting the tone of urgency, calling-on, and reassurance. After providing a somewhat clearer understanding of all that rests on this critical duty, Marley reverts back to the countdown form for the song’s final stanza. This time, the sense of repetition and doubling helps remind the ‘worker’ (i.e. the audience, who is implicated in the ‘process of labour’ as both listener of the music and recipient of spiritual and pedagogical sermon) also works to reinforce the urgency. As reflected in Bob Marley’s personal (and by now, fleeting) life, it is precisely because of how important the metaphorical “next day” is that all of this labour must be performed. This layer of meaning is also represented in the texture of the final verse, like when the melody begins to stray and display an improvisation as he sings, “Say we got, one day to go now/”. In a further instance of ‘impromtu’ musical variation, here we are reintroduced to Marley’s well-known vocal “ad-libbing” techniques, the “oooh-ooh-ooh” found near the end and the ‘wotcha”, etc., which convey a wide meter of feelings which range from fatigue, overworkedness, and anguish to commandeering, elation, and euphoria–elusive emotion impossible to capture with such vivacity in the lyrics and instrumentals themselves.
The final lyric of the song provides its own wealth of insight, as Marley ends the song with “If you aint got nothing to do/…./We got some work for you”—retaining his position as both labour and spiritual leader, as one who has the authority to assign “work” to the idle. It is worth noting here the importance of the background context in fully comprehending the discourse of mission in Marley’s music. A quick scan through the lyrics reveals that the nature of the “work” Marley alludes to is never explicitly stated in the lyrics. The “work” that he seems to refer to is found throughout the messages in his musical canon, as well as the personal example he provided through his own practices. In recalling the far more circulated “Redemption Song” from the same album, the tasks that are required of “Jah people” are not like the material tasks challenging the labouror, for “redemption is not simply destiny. It is work—redemption works—that is the product of dispersed networks of belonging that bind us as people.” (Hill, 2010). In fact, the “work” seems to be intentionally obscured and therefore open to interpretation, such as in the final stanza when the countdown has reached “one day to go”, and just as the singer begins “working for—“, he is cut short and the listener is forced to do his or her own work to fully engage in the song and it’s meaning. 

WORKS CITED

Brathwaite, Kamau. History of the Voice: The Development of Nation Language in Anglophone Caribbean Poetry. London: New Beacon, 1984.

Hill, Robert A. "Redemption Works: From “African Redemption” to “Redemption Song”." Review: Literature and Arts of the Americas 43.2 (2010): 200-07.

Hodges, H. "Walk Good: West Indian Oratorical Traditions in Bob Marley's Uprising." The Journal of Commonwealth Literature 40.2 (2005): 43-63.

Marley, Bob. "Work." Uprising. Bob Marley & The Wailers. Tuff Gong/Island Records, 1980. Recording.



(ORIGINALLY SUBMITTED IN 2014)

04 September 2018

On Ignorance, Self-Perception, and the Other in Tao Lin's Taipei



Recently, I was inspired to revisit Tao Lin's hi-def drug-infused yet sobering novel Taipei. I first read this book when it was released to mixed reviews in 2013, for an English course on the contemporary American novel (I think?). While it was insufferable at first, its fragmented style and alienated/alienating protagonist Paul slowly grew on me and I ended up writing an essay inspired by it. 

Here's a version of the 2013 essay I submitted--hopefully this persuades you to read it, rather than the opposite:


Knowing Lots of Nothing: 

On Ignorance, Self-Perception, and the Other in Taipei


It is said that we live in the so-called Information Age, a time in which conceivably, digital technologies have furnished us with the ability to send and receive all sorts of information instantaneously and across borders. This transcendence of data is further sustained by the travel technologies available to help in our physical mobilization and transition from point A to point B. While these technologies seem on the surface to enhance our ability to understand the world around us, they often undermine our ability to understand the complex dynamics involved in our social interactions, our immutable interiority, and our memory as a guide. This theme of conscious ignorance is one which has been visited in Tao Lin’s 2013 novel Taipei. I will suggest that the protagonist Paul’s own ignorance stems precisely from the wide, unlimited, and multifaceted availability of sources of information that is within his reach. I will be exploring how Paul’s overabundant epistemological access has denied him the ability to know how to read emotions of his own and others, thus creating a sense of self-alienation, which is only remedied through a trip to Taipei.
Paul is mainly tuned out, or ignorant, to the emotional status of the individuals he is closely involved with. The reader is bombarded with this incapacity several times within the first encounters: Paul is “unsure what he felt exactly” with Michelle (Lin, 4; 9; 10; etc.). It is only through reading into text messages and checking on updated Facebook and Twitter statuses that Paul comprehends how his friends and loved ones feel towards him. In the midst of an argument with Michelle, “Paul felt himself trying to interpret the situation, as if there was a problem to be solved, but there didn’t seem to be anything, or maybe there was, but he was three or four skill sets away from comprehension, like an amoeba trying to create a personal webpage using CSS” (Lin, 10)— his inability to comprehend parallels his “expert” knowledge of the digital world, as evident in his lexicon. He is only able to know where his friendships with Kyle, Gabby, and the rest stand once they have “unfollowed” or “de-friended” him on the social media platforms (Lin, 30), and can only grasp his own disinterest in pursuing romance with Laura upon scrutinizing their email correspondence (Lin, 50; 53).  But such unconventional methods of reading others also provides much room for misreading. As Andrew Martin writes in The Knowledge of Ignorance, this “allows or demands a response, an interpretation, a judgment. Thus the text is not unassailable, not self-evident or self-sufficient, but just as vulnerable to attack as the author. The reader is always a latent misreader, critic, enemy; his weapons are misattribution, distortion, and misinterpretation.” (Martin, 43).
Such mediation of emotional (un)knowingness can be traced further back in Paul’s life: in 3rd grade he soon realizes that "90-95%" of people he encounters will be/are "separate and unknowable"; in middle-school his inability to interpret or know how to respond to being antagonized is then misinterpreted as feeling "too cool" to react by the other kids; and by freshman year he has resigned to remaining silent, all but losing his ability to know how to react to emotional and social stimuli (Lin, 39-40). As Audrea Lim writes, Taipei “is a depiction of the alienated subject in a personality-driven world where social signals and media messages are so complex…Again and again, Paul is driven to despair by ordinary social reality…” (Lim, 2013).  Ian Samson corroborates, comparing Tao Lin’s novel to the likes of Allen Ginsberg’s “Howl” in its “desperate desire to connect”, that the “novel dwells on the meaning of disassociation and self-exile.” (Samson, 2013).
Confined within this digitized system of self expression through proxy, Paul is prevented from understanding in any clear or cohesive sense his own feelings and emotive responses, and increasingly goes “without knowing why” he feels depressed (Lin, 53). In one culminating instance, Paul experiences a new feeling which he struggles to describe: a “sadness-based fear, immune to tone and interpretation, as if not meant for humans…Sometimes it was less of a feeling than a realization that maybe, after you died, in the absence of time, without a mechanism for tolerance, or means of communication, you could privately experience a nightmare state for an eternity.” (Lin, 56). The inability to read the emotional status of others (without literally reading it online) is inextricably linked to Paul’s ignorance about his own state, for “…one cannot know the ‘I’ except through the other, but this kind of knowledge is itself a kind of nescience…the problem  of other minds is not just the problem of other minds, but also the problem of my own mind…my mind is itself other to itself.” (Bennett, 111).
Paul’s knowledge of how to perform his individual “human” and/or social functions is therefore also heavily mediated, through the plethora of drugs that he frequently uses on the one hand, and largely through the digital media which he is perpetually involved in on the other hand. Paul is always in a state of confusion whenever he begins to interrogate his own interiority, and the thoughts he has (which are Lin highlights through the use of quotation marks) reflect this state of inner conflict; he is “completely lost” (Lin, 19), “lost in the world” (Lin, 7), “grateful to exist” (Lin, 248). On the one hand, Paul is almost vaporous: he is all interiority. At one especially alienating point, “Paul could sense the presence of a metaphysical distance from where, if crossed, he would not be able to return…” and “realized he was (and, for an unknown amount of time, had been) rushing ahead in an unconscious, misguided effort to get away from where he was: inside himself…” (Lin, 202-205). This is also marked by the endless flow of inner and outer dialogue he steers. As Samson writes, Paul is “continually aroused but perpetually dulled…(a) style in which fragmented thoughts follow narcissistic flights of fancy, with an underlying tone of desperation and despair. Paul has nothing much to say, but he says it anyway…” (Samson, 2013).
            At the same time, this acute and intensely self-conscious interiority sits alongside Paul’s inability to comprehend a concrete reality and is exhausted by the digital technologies visited earlier, as well as his self-narcotization.  Referencing Michel Foucaut’s theory of “technologies of the self”, Lim writes: “Drugs can help us to adapt, to be more productive, and even to excel within our circumstances, to make our lives more bearable, and in some cases, to radically reconfigure our subjectivity, if not the world. In Taipei, drug use is less about changing the world than it is about adjusting to it.” (Lim, 2013). Paul’s most basic function of locating his spatial and temporal existence in a concrete reality is greatly hindered throughout the text, perhaps as a byproduct of his frequent trysts with opioids, stimulants, and every drug in between: “his affectless tone is especially unsettling when applied to drug experiences.” (Lim, 2013). The ‘drug fight’ episode in which he and Erin have a logic-based argument on the effects of cocaine and Paul cites literature as proof demonstrates this disaffected attitude as well as a sense of conscious, or intentional ignorance (Lin, 157-8; 219). When asked by Erin how he knows, he responds “based on what I know, from things I’ve read and experienced, about tolerance…” and when Erin suggests that past experience doesn’t necessarily correlate to future outcome, Paul says conclusively: “’I’m not trying to argue with you, based on what I know’…aware it was funny to qualify ‘I’m not trying to argue with you’ with ‘based on what I know’, but not feeling humoured.” (Lin, 219).
Paul and the others traverse all across America and beyond, and much like the Vernian technique Martin writes of, “the ubiquitous images of multiplication and division (geo)graphically narrate the fragmentation of the matter and media of science…(they) signify the fragmentation of the classical configuration of the rational, Newtonian universe, encompassed by a unifying framework of knowledge…” (Martin, 176). Though perpetually in transit, Taipei takes on an important dynamic as the realm in which the typically unknown can be made knowable to Paul, where he can locate markers that orient him towards the directions of understanding. On his final visit, Paul believes that “if a place existed where he could go to scramble some initial momentum, to disable a setting implemented before birth, or disrupt the out-of-control formation of some incomprehensible worldview, and allow a kind of settling, over time, to occur…it would be here.” (Lin, 164). While there Paul reflects on a neon sign that “conveys “too much information”,  leading him to muse on how technology has lost its enchantment for him,  that “technology had begun for him to mostly only indicate the inevitability and vicinity of nothingness…Technology, an abstraction, undetectable in concrete reality, was accomplishing its concrete task… by way of an increasingly committed and multiplying workforce of humans, who receive, over hundreds of generations, a certain kind of advancement…in exchange for converting a sufficient amount of matter into computerized matter for computers to be able to build themselves…” (Lin, 166-7). This feeling of accessing this latent, hidden transcendental wisdom is sharpened by the fact that even Las Vegas, famed for its bright lights, neon signs and related symbols failed to speak to Paul; Taipei  is the locale in which Paul undergoes his epistemological transformation, thus leading up to that last moment of nirvana.
Post-Taipei, Paul and Erin “start to love each other more…They find themselves doing things, rather than merely watching things…life is changing from the aesthetic to the ethical.” (Martin, 2013), or even from the digital to the actual. It is when he has returned from Taipei and is with Erin that Paul experiences his moment of heightened awareness versus hyper-awareness, enhanced on the one hand by the corporeality of laying with the character he has come closest to genuineness with and on the other a sense of metaphysical communion with beings in general. For Paul, caressing Erin’s back “gradually felt like his only method of remaining in concrete reality, where he and Erin, and other people, shared a world… Paul began to discern his rhythmic petting as a continuous striving to elicit certain information from Erin by responding or not responding to her rhythms, in a cycle whose goal was to produce momentary equilibrium…he felt able to instantly discern changes in her physiology, which in entirety began to seem like an inconstant unit of unique, irreducible information…that was continuously expressed and that bypassed the parts of them that allowed for deliberation or perception or intuition, beginning and ending in the only place where they were exactly together, undifferentiated and unknowable, but couldn’t, in their present form, ever reach, like a thing communicating directly with itself, rendering them both irrelevant.” (Lin, 243-4)
Memory, and more specifically the failure of memory to produce or enhance “usable” knowledge is one which figures heavily in Taipei. Memory at its most basic function is as a record of experience, a holder of the places, times, and moments one has undergone, and presumably learned from. But what happens when such memory is fragmented, lacking, or even inaccessible? Both texts confront such questions openly. In Taipei, Paul’s memory at times seeps into his perception of present reality, but for the most part, eludes him whenever he attempts to revisit it, like an unfamiliar book he is reading for the first timr (Lin, 18; 201; 228; 246-7; etc) .
Thus, as we have seen throughout Taipei, the realm of knowledge is an abstract one difficult to locate and even more difficult to adequately exist in, for it is formless and ever-evolving. The realm of ignorance, then is just as difficult to locate or perceive if one exists in it. It is a paradox of sorts, for if one knows that they do not know, is this not actually closer to knowing? Lin confronts these ideas head on by positioning Paul in between both realms, where Taipei provides the time and space for a more “enlightened” perception of Self and Other.




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